On February 7 I spoke about the first photo assignment titled NO which had a whole list of items you could not photograph. We had to turn in 4 photos. On Thursday we received the teachers grading and critique of each photo. I received a 91 out of 100. Those who know my perfectionist aspirations would know I was somewhat disappointed in the score but I can agree with some of his comments. The following are the photos with his score and comments.
Photo 1 - score 24/25
Good composition, and use of available light, unique subject. Fits the assighment well. All lines are interesting in a way, too.
Photo 2 - score 24/25
Very creepy in a good way (that is because the first comment someone made in the class critique was that this was very creepy!). Strong camera angle. Nice use of depth of field although t is just not quite on the face where it should be. Composed well.
Photo 3 - score 22/25
Good camera angle. Fills the frame well, although some at the top would be good to crop out. Depth of field is effective.
Photo 4 - Score 21/25
Composition is good. A bit too askew and could use a better crop to simplify the image. Nice use of color - blue against the brick.
The scores on the next assignment should be interesting since I thought these were better than my second assignment.
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